All Comments on 'The Old Fisherman Ch. 01-02'

by biber

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CumbabyCumbabyover 19 years ago
Not very believable

Not convinced she was hungry enough to eat 65 year old cock?

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Bravo meine herr

Excellent story, and very well told, as I said in a comment about your first story, any language errors only serve to add atmosphere and flavour to your story.

It should not be difficult for any reader to realise hat you are aus Deutchland, despite this some of them seem to have failed to grasp this fact.

From your statement at the end of the story, about the invitation to dinner, I asume that this story will continue, I certainly hope so.

I will very much look forward to reading your future writings.

Danke schoen, unt, auf wiedersehen.

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