All Comments on 'The Optometrist'

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impo_61impo_61about 8 years ago
Is this a fantasy?

Is this a fantasy? If so, it's a good one...If it isn't it not so good...I'll look at it as a fantasy...3*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Your Critic

Was wrong. Your scores are fine and they show your willingness to try new areas and to be creative. Thanks for your work. As to this story, I may have trouble during my new eye appointment as one tech who checks my eye pressure is quite cute.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
WACC

Scores are meaningless since they are rigged...

The story is boring because it is 1) implausible 2) no character development, 3) no twists, no emotion, and 4) no creativity. Not very erotic at all. Which is unfortunately the case with most of the trash on lit these days. Just a slut wife (who is hardly a loving wife) with a cuck hubby. I keep hoping for something mildly entertaining. This wasn't it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
There won't be a next appointment

Her license was pulled due to her doctoe patient relationships and the AMA & CDC investigations

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
No.

Too far-fetched to capture my imagination.

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