All Comments on 'The Oracle Ch. 02'

by Fionalee

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josephstevensjosephstevensover 10 years ago
Good First Stories..

Thanks for your first two stories. Very good indeed! Graphic descriptions and interesting 'novel-building' plots...more please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Dont like this story.

I just I feel sorry for both the main characters of your story. Wish you would have made it into a happy ending for the both of them.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
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Enjoyed both. It would be a pity to leave the story here. Who is the woman she initially saw in her vision for Jonathan?

Looking forward to more.

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