All Comments on 'The Package Ch. 01'

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mrwidehorizonsmrwidehorizonsalmost 6 years ago
Great start!

Can't wait to see where this takes her!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
not a bad start

...but conscientious doesn't mean what you think it means based on the context you've used it in.

liz33ndliz33ndalmost 5 years ago

oh, this could be a fun story

1HandReading1HandReadingalmost 5 years ago
A good start

The BBC and chastity aspects of this story will keep me reading more chapters

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