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Click here- "At last!" she gasped, when I finally entered her.
Eyes closed, she threw her head back on the pillow. Surrounded by a cascade of her long hair, she looked positively angelic.
- "So beautiful." I murmured. Minika smiled. She didn't quite believe me, but she had ceased arguing the point.
- "Says the Master of the Harem." she said.
- "I would choose you first, before any of them." I said. Min's eyes flew open: she recognized the truth of that statement in my voice.
We made love sweetly, unhurriedly, again and again, until the first light of dawn.
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Thank you very, very much for your positive comments and feedback. I am especially flattered by those suggesting that I should make this a 20-part series.
I'm not sure that would be wise - I originally envisioned this as a six-parter (like the Murder Mystery). The darn thing just kept growing. I started liking my own characters (surely a serious character flaw).
Also, I will be AFK for a month, and that will be more than enough time for me to lose the thread of this story. That's one reason why, regretfully, I have to end this tale very soon.
The other is that I already have a longer project in mind. It will be qualitatively different - say, an 'R' rating, instead of an "X".
That's why Part 12 of this story will probably be the last. I will try to include a thorough epilogue, to let you know what happens to the characters you liked best.
Again ... Thank you - sincerely - for all the support.
AspernEssling
This is nowhere near as good as your other stories... This is simply a series of fucks... with very little setup between them... There's the groundwork for a story in there... (I like the intrigue with the little beggar)... But so far it hasn't crawled out of the stroke fest yet...
-jaye-
You really touched us by reuniting him with Min--but having his father die upped the emotional impact. Having Bereyar waiting though...is oh-so tempting and lovely.
Awesome story. Every once in a while, i find a story on here that is so good i keep reading when im not even horny. This is one of those.
But if I may suggest something. I hope you make some series of a young guy and a milf.
Really enjoying where you've been taking us. It will be sad to lose it! Can't wait to see how you resolve this although either the death of the emperor or the emperor's mother would perhaps do it...
It has also not been resolved why he looks so like the emperor, is there a secret family connection?!
You have kept my attention from the first chapter, i do understand that you want to end it and get on with something new. Just don't end it with a cliffhanger and no loose ends.
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story up until now. It is clever and beautiful and interesting, and sexy. The empress still seems dangerous, and the new 1st wife such a lovely figure, and the emperor too aloof at the moment, for me to really guess how it all wraps up. The emperor and 1st wife don't seem to have any relationship, what will happen when, if she discovers the truth? I'll have to re-read the story to understand the empress and son's relationship, how she unintentionally or weirdly emasculated him. That would need resolution of some kind too. Seems like the only way to get what Carrach wants would be for the other two main characters to change their personalities almost 100%. Since that is unlikely.... I'm almost afraid to know the ending. Or I guess he could somehow escape... I'll just have to be patient. Thank you so much for this story!
... and there are many I have liked. This is so clever and funny, touching and entertaining. I too selfishly would have liked it to go on but I have enjoyed how you presented chapter 11. Look forward to the rest and to other stories from you. Thanks so much!
but completely understand your reasoning. If that break will affect the quality of your work, you should end it how ever you want.
There is so much more you could do with the story! Please don't kill it!