The Palace Pt. 11

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AspernEssling
AspernEssling
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- "At last!" she gasped, when I finally entered her.

Eyes closed, she threw her head back on the pillow. Surrounded by a cascade of her long hair, she looked positively angelic.

- "So beautiful." I murmured. Minika smiled. She didn't quite believe me, but she had ceased arguing the point.

- "Says the Master of the Harem." she said.

- "I would choose you first, before any of them." I said. Min's eyes flew open: she recognized the truth of that statement in my voice.

We made love sweetly, unhurriedly, again and again, until the first light of dawn.

******

Thank you very, very much for your positive comments and feedback. I am especially flattered by those suggesting that I should make this a 20-part series.

I'm not sure that would be wise - I originally envisioned this as a six-parter (like the Murder Mystery). The darn thing just kept growing. I started liking my own characters (surely a serious character flaw).

Also, I will be AFK for a month, and that will be more than enough time for me to lose the thread of this story. That's one reason why, regretfully, I have to end this tale very soon.

The other is that I already have a longer project in mind. It will be qualitatively different - say, an 'R' rating, instead of an "X".

That's why Part 12 of this story will probably be the last. I will try to include a thorough epilogue, to let you know what happens to the characters you liked best.

Again ... Thank you - sincerely - for all the support.

AspernEssling

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is nowhere near as good as your other stories... This is simply a series of fucks... with very little setup between them... There's the groundwork for a story in there... (I like the intrigue with the little beggar)... But so far it hasn't crawled out of the stroke fest yet...

-jaye-

Comentarista82Comentarista82almost 2 years ago

You really touched us by reuniting him with Min--but having his father die upped the emotional impact. Having Bereyar waiting though...is oh-so tempting and lovely.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Legit made me cry

Awesome story. Every once in a while, i find a story on here that is so good i keep reading when im not even horny. This is one of those.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Like you, I've come to like your character too..

But if I may suggest something. I hope you make some series of a young guy and a milf.

HibernisHibernisover 7 years ago
Wonderful

Really enjoying where you've been taking us. It will be sad to lose it! Can't wait to see how you resolve this although either the death of the emperor or the emperor's mother would perhaps do it...

It has also not been resolved why he looks so like the emperor, is there a secret family connection?!

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