All Comments on 'The Palace Pt. 12'

Loved the story and how it's being concluded. I hope you have something in mind about the beggar Serim and who he is and how he seemed to know so much.

I was afraid you would try to wrap this up too quickly and shortchange the whole story... I should have had more faith. This chapter was at the same level of quality as the other ones. Thanks again!

Why, oh why, can't every author take such care with a story (and I include myself in that lament). Very well done and completely entertaining!!

asianToy

I sucked so much air into my lungs when I saw this update that I chocked.

You did say that 12 would be the last and my mind just couldn't cope with it. I am glad this is not the end.

But that title...

I was imagining some blood shed and what not. Sigh. Glad Carrach is okay, and everyone else, it was about time Bishkur showed his cards.

Can't wait for the end.

Although...

It keeps getting better and better..

Wonderful story. Bravo!

It just keeps getting better and better. Looking forward to the next chapter.

and the story is nearly done

interested to know did you have this storyline mapped before you wrote Gamers?

did this whole plot eemerge after your experiences writing Gamers ?

I have a "Just Wow" category for certain saved stories. This one goes in there.

Well-planned coup, although I didn't expect how you executed it.

I have never felt so much pain like when I found out Yasina was fucking other men. my heart seriously clenched

Not surprised that Yasina was fucking other men to gain their loyalty. I was very pleased that Bishkur had learned from his mother how to set a trap. Great writing. 5 stars!