Try the free LITEROTICA WEBCAMS!

All Comments on 'The Park'

by Middleagepoet

Sort by:
Newest FirstOldest First
  • 3 Comments
notnice66notnice66over 14 years ago
Needs editing

Need to read over it before submitting - eg you used the word 'morning' 3 times in the first sentence

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 14 years ago
Hot

I really enjoyed reading this story. It was hot and sexy. Thank You.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
does need editing . . .

. . .but I didn't notice until I read the other comment. Something sort of distracted me from such details, maybe other details? Hot and juicy!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Login
Post as:
Anonymous
Login