All Comments on 'The Party'

About a poker game

Or use spell check and grammar check.

enjoyable, not sure about the spelling content comment by another user - unless they are upset by the correct spelling of words like favour using a u

Must be an american complaining who doesn't appreciate that there is another world out there that doesn't do everything the american way.

Excellent story, more detail would have been nice.

Really ? Why not ?

Some other world .

very good if this continues but if everything ends here ... too light

A well used, but fun premise. I do wish tiggertim would have made the story longer with more action and emotion as the story was a bit dry. Would have also enjoyed the wife having him do some noncon/reluctance actions…something to really crank up the heat.

Also, very frustrating to tease another chapter and then don’t follow through…this story was good enough for another chapter.