All Comments on 'The People's Inquisitor'

by jlorthia

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BalddudesrockBalddudesrockover 7 years ago
Ridiculous!

Campy!

Goofy plot!

and...

LOTS OF FUN!

I loved it.

jlorthiajlorthiaover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you balddudesrock

For recognizing the intent. I am glad you enjoyed the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

I think this might be your best story yet. Isobel and Alessandra are both so arrogant and spoiled that when they finally receive their humiliation it is all the more worth it. You are becoming quite skilled at writing these kind of stories. I would have liked to find out what Isobel/Alessandra were up to in the epilogue. Hopefully more unfortunate circumstances befall them!

Keep up the good work, jlorthia

jlorthiajlorthiaover 7 years agoAuthor
Thank you anonymous!

I'll be hopefully writing some more stories soon. I have a little bit of a departure planned, it will have similar themes though, of course.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Impressive

Very good story! I liked how you referred to their feet and was only sorry they were not punished as well. Congratulations.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Pictures please

The common people saw all the action. The readers would like to see some pictures of the well-caned arses, too

Gym52Gym52over 2 years ago

EXCELLENT.

Thank you for posting this tale, it was well prepared,as were the readers, with minimal sexual activity, but with a good dose of humiliation, bondage and physical chastisment.

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