by jlorthia
EXCELLENT.
Thank you for posting this tale, it was well prepared,as were the readers, with minimal sexual activity, but with a good dose of humiliation, bondage and physical chastisment.
The common people saw all the action. The readers would like to see some pictures of the well-caned arses, too
Very good story! I liked how you referred to their feet and was only sorry they were not punished as well. Congratulations.
I'll be hopefully writing some more stories soon. I have a little bit of a departure planned, it will have similar themes though, of course.
I think this might be your best story yet. Isobel and Alessandra are both so arrogant and spoiled that when they finally receive their humiliation it is all the more worth it. You are becoming quite skilled at writing these kind of stories. I would have liked to find out what Isobel/Alessandra were up to in the epilogue. Hopefully more unfortunate circumstances befall them!
Keep up the good work, jlorthia
For recognizing the intent. I am glad you enjoyed the story.