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ViolaFraya04ViolaFraya04about 6 years ago

Wow, it was really well written and good read

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

1 ) Pick a tense, and stay with it. Jumping back and forth from past to present is irritating to the reader.

2 ) One SHAKES their head side to side to signify NO.

One NODS their head up and down to indicate YES.

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