by GC10
Truth is that women hate them just as much--That's why they have trouble getting laid
I can't imagine what anyone would find laudatory in either of the chapters to this "story." LOL
This woman, has no morals, no class, no ethics, and no feeling of self respect. In other words, she is trash.
Can not understand the negative comments. Some nice twist on a common theme.
keep it going.
... at one point Beverly becomes Susan. Other than that a good read. By the way guys, if you do not like the genre, read elsewhere - this is fiction, fantasy, not real life,
great story. Looking forward to the rest of the installments.
Only one jarring moment - when the character Graham became Gerald in one graph.