by GC10
great story. Looking forward to the rest of the installments.
Only one jarring moment - when the character Graham became Gerald in one graph.
... at one point Beverly becomes Susan. Other than that a good read. By the way guys, if you do not like the genre, read elsewhere - this is fiction, fantasy, not real life,
Can not understand the negative comments. Some nice twist on a common theme.
keep it going.
This woman, has no morals, no class, no ethics, and no feeling of self respect. In other words, she is trash.
I can't imagine what anyone would find laudatory in either of the chapters to this "story." LOL
Truth is that women hate them just as much--That's why they have trouble getting laid