All Comments on 'The Perfect Whore Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Infantile Story Concept

Adults don't act this way. The "writer" has no idea how to develop a plausible story line.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Down Hill

This story started out great, but it's been down hill since. What's going on here?? Back up and start again with Chapter 2. Please!!!

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Started out in the toilet and is ready to flush.

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