All Comments on 'The Photoshoot'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
sorry

not really erotic and nobody is going to like a lifetime sentence in a cell underground with no sun. even the guy would not like the girl anymore after a while because she would look shit without daylight. so don't pretend it's real if it's a fantasy. and make it bearable otherwise it's not fun to read

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 16 years ago
the author has a kinky dark side

A good little girl,led down the wrong road, and becomes a studs fuck toy. FUCK that works for me,tight wet pussy,and big hard cock,sounds like a party I'd like.....Rich

RossDanielsRossDanielsalmost 16 years ago
Well written . . .

. . . but a little too dark for my taste. I hope you'll write more and try some other topics.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Yuk

Not even erotic and in really bad taste

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After enjoying reading the submissions on this website I felt it was finally time to write a few of my own!