All Comments on 'The Picnic'

it is a nice story, but maybe it is too short, or something else, but for me it didn't quite click.

A great erotic story. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for the time and effort it took you to write this story.

This is so hot and sexxy! With summer coming or arrived depending where you live I can only hope this is reality for allot of the fortunate who get to read this wonderful story!