All Comments on 'The Picnic'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Absolutely Delicious!

This is so hot and sexxy! With summer coming or arrived depending where you live I can only hope this is reality for allot of the fortunate who get to read this wonderful story!

sherlock40sherlock40almost 19 years ago
A wonderful story!

A great erotic story. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for the time and effort it took you to write this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
nice, but somehow

it is a nice story, but maybe it is too short, or something else, but for me it didn't quite click.

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I am 50-something Latina with a healthy sex drive and an imaginative mind. I finished my master degree in urban planning. While I was sad that I didn't finish my MA in English Literature, I still love reading erotic stories. For those of you curious about my personal life an...