All Comments on 'The Picture of Dorian Gray Pt. 01-03'

Good luck with that.

The intro convinced me to agree with you, reading your stories would be a waste of time. Thanks for the heads up!

I doubt insulting the readers is the best way to start. It took me out, anyway.

Its only fair that you warned us. But please take your crap to fetish or another side!!

What's a big ten cock? Is that some weird college mascot or did you sneak a bestiality story into loving-wives?

At least you were considerate enough to warn readers.

added to his myriad of shortcomings due to character, however he is still a man, TK U MLJ LV NV

Web browsers?

I hadn't even read the intro before checking the comments. Kimi's word is good enough for me!

Were any human's involved in either the story or the writing of it?

I tend to believe NOT!

Got as far as the second paragraph and stopped. The tags said it all. Any time the word "humiliation" appears, count on it, the story will be nothing but garbage. Don't care for garbage, the only place for it is in the trash can. Second story so far that I couldn't stomach to start reading, normal for this category anymore. Can't wait for the decent erotic writers to post something, anything but this garbage.

What termites do for wood ! Was it written using alphabetti spaghetti and diarrhoea ?

Shan't insult my eyes by bothering them with any more of your output.

Whatever the story was about could have been written without the sad tropes of women losing their minds over big cocks. Make them avaricious whores, faithless sluts, or just plain dumb but women don't just lose their moral compass like Catherine did. As far as the prenup and house etc. just fucking stupid

Please, don't...!

You're being slaughtered by the comments. Thanks, but no thanks. I'll pass on this one. You really must have written a bad one, never seen so much negativity on any story. Well on second thought, don't think anything posted today is getting great reviews. Where do you authors come from? Outer space?

Your right. It cracks me up all the asses who obviously read the whole story, even after your warning, then trash what you told them to expect!!! I love your stories please continue soon. I would love to see you continue "Father' Assets" series too!! Thanks for the enjoyable, hot read. Made me hard the whole time!!!

MENTAL ILLNESS FOR SURE. PLEASE SEE YOUR CONSELOR OR BETTER YET, GO TO THE FAR END OF THE SWAMP YOU CAME FROM AND MOLT WITH T HE REST OF YOUR RELATIVES.

and so little substance. I suspect you have a lot of talent and wit, but I have no idea where you put those gifts to use. It ain't here. This is like some slap stick comedy movie, with the producer sitting in the audience and wondering why everyone is laughing at his tragic epic. Well, at least he got the tragic part.

Better luck with future efforts. But you might want to reconsider who is really wasting their time.

A masterpiece...i can't wait for Polly to join the fun...

With the preface of this being a long story of many facets, the haters chime in about

the length and complexity. With the warning of this being terribly cruel and that they

Should make an about-face should that not be their fetish, they harp upon the state

Of your mental health. These people are the Martins of the world:) ignore their drivelings; you are the Richard of literotica and they can suck I‎t. ~David

write more stories of huge asset series they are awesome

this is your best work

purely sadistic wicked fun

keep going

Glad to see you're back! New story with new characters! (Though, don't think I didn't notice the crossovers with all your other works ;) )

Not a whole lot of variation here compared to your previous works, but that's part of what makes it great, since not many authors write this particular fetish.

Looking forward to more carnage! Tell it like it is!

Also, do you have other stories posted on any other sites? I'd like to read them!

I hope part 04-06 is coming soon because this was possibly the hottest story you’ve ever written, love how Polly is coming into the story.

you take too much time to write a story

we are waiting eagerly

Thank you for the preface. The only time I wasted was on this note.

Seven parts? Really? The intro is more than enough...1*

Intro is quite enough for.me. I read the original and hated it. It was older though, I think it was a portrait of the dude.

Helen is possibly the most vile, disgusting, evil character I’ve ever read. I understand greed. I understand stopped at nothing, to achieve wealth and power. But only drawing satisfaction from maximizing the pain inflicted on those who trust you?

If the goal was creating the most heinous female character, then it’s a massive success.