All Comments on 'The Pirate and the Pixie'

Great! I hope it's not the end.

That was a really REALLY good story! Cant wait to see what happens next! (lol please tell me there is more!!??) Well Done!

MORE!!!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Great story! I hope there's more to come!

All the previous comments are understatements.

That was hot, and touching at the same time!!! I hope you continue writing! A happy ending would be great ; )

Erotic! Fantastic storyline, riviting and dripping with sensuality. Hope to see more of this adventure. Thanks for the read :)

I certainly hope to read more of your stories, and like everyone else, I hope 'the pirate and the pixie' will have a few more chapters.

write more! it was well written, clear, organized, the characters had depth and the sex was hot. more more more!

And I thank you for the email letting me know you had a new story up. Good God, Woman! No one should be able to write that well!!! :-) I would love to read more of these two characters...please!

that was one of the most amazing stories ever

you are a fantastic writer

write much more to this story and fast

fantastic job!!

continue it pleasee

you are an extremely good writer

one of the best ive ever read

I am in love with this story. The relationship between Rory and Kali is explosive and a pleasure to read- they both fight for and win in dominating the other. I'm hoping that you continue this but as with all your stories, it is already quite fantastic on it's own. Thank you for writing.

this is definitely one of those stories to be continued.wonderful!!!:)

i agree please write another chapter..soon..its a great story so far.

I love this story.. Rory and Kali are awesome and I await more stories of them..

please continue this is such a great story..... Keep on writing.. We need more chapters on these characters!!!!! Thanks!

Please tell me there is more to this??? We need to know what happens!! Did she end up staying?? She go back?? She find out she's pregnant?? Something? Anything? Please we NEED to know!

Truly you are an excellent writer! I love your stories of strong women and their men. Rarely does one find such a gem in this place.

Please do write more stories of such women. Love them!

This was a great read for me. It was well written and was full of imagination, and a real sense for the passion of people in any Era. Loved it.

This story has so much potential!! I wish you would continue.

Thank you for the treat! I'm so in love with your writing! You are amazing!

The author seemed to be alternating between calling Kali her then him and then her again. I understand this was a way to highlight the initial confusion experienced by Rory, but it was clumsy, patently obvious, and utterly superfluous. Other lapses include:

loosing (losing) (2)

Pirate (pirate) (40

Captain's (captain's)

(KALI CHANGES FROM SHE TO HE BACK TO SHE AGAIN)

(HOW CAN THE BOY BE SHORTER THAN HE HIMSELF IS????) (HIS IS ONLY ONE PERSON!!!!)

(WHO IS THE RAT????)

sea water (seawater)

Pixie (pixie) (20)

mestisa (mestiza)

Captain (captain) (17)

Watch (watch)

turn on (turn-on)

Goddess (goddess)

presents themselves (him/herself)

bear handed (barehanded)

any more (anymore) (2)

because it was difficult to hold the sword in her bear hands?

and why didn't she just shoot him?

If you think about it, the boy, girl thing is just a change of perspective, it made complete sense to me when I read it. Maybe a division or some thing like +++ might help some people understand it better, but extremely well written, except for a few spelling mistakes. Thanks Boadicea for another good story.

Please continue this!!!!!

Talented writing that is thoroughly enjoy. The installment is eagerly anticipated!

Absolutely great story I love pirate and time travel erotic stories

Absolutely great story I love pirate and time travel erotic stories

Really enjoyed it, but it feels unfinished. I was expecting something along the lines of her waking up in her own bed, naked and with her arm bandaged, distraught at what she had lost. She was depressed for a while until a new cop transferred into her precinct, he looked almost exactly like Rory and when he looked at her, it was as if he recognised her. He was introduced as Gregory Frost, they met and talked, he was a descendant of Rory, they fell in love etc, etc, etc.