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Anonymousabout 7 years agoof the sea
you make every word sex, even without the sex. ...more. and then more after that. please.
dendiaabout 7 years agostunning writing
You are such a talented author. The imagery of returning the tears to the sea, and the land greedily keeping them was beautiful.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoAhh f*ck!ng mazing!
I love this! You should publish! You should turn this into an audio book! You are simply brilliant!
Thought you should know. :)
Anonymousover 4 years agoI love these pirates
they're so frigging sweet oh my god I love Ghost and Natch and Finn and Cap and Cookie they're all so *sweet* and so real and I am in love with all of them
Anonymousabout 4 years agodamn straight natch you fucking tell him. excellent dialogue. your writing is so beautiful it's like reading poetry
Anonymousabout 4 years agoBrilliant!
You are a brilliant and gifted writer! - Thanks for sharing this amazing story!
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