All Comments on 'The Pirate King Ch. 04'

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RangeExpanderRangeExpanderalmost 3 years ago

I am so curious about the deep past of these men....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Brilliant!

You are a brilliant and gifted writer! - Thanks for sharing this amazing story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

damn straight natch you fucking tell him. excellent dialogue. your writing is so beautiful it's like reading poetry

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
I love these pirates

they're so frigging sweet oh my god I love Ghost and Natch and Finn and Cap and Cookie they're all so *sweet* and so real and I am in love with all of them

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Ahh f*ck!ng mazing!

I love this! You should publish! You should turn this into an audio book! You are simply brilliant!

Thought you should know. :)

bfire315bfire315over 6 years ago

Your writing is captivating.

dendiadendiaabout 7 years ago
stunning writing

You are such a talented author. The imagery of returning the tears to the sea, and the land greedily keeping them was beautiful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
of the sea

you make every word sex, even without the sex. ...more. and then more after that. please.

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