All Comments on 'The Pleasure Unit'

A little bit THX1138. Would like to see more, but ending it here can certainly generate a lot of reader speculation. I think there will be more value in continuing, letting the reader know the pieces that make up this world.

How soon does he reagain his memery and take his revenge, it would make the next chapter worth reading.

(As title) stuck togeterr and not making any sence, there is no story there at all.