All Comments on 'The Pool'

Nice little fantasy! Well written, vivid, and extremly arousing!

Great job!

Although the plot has been done before, it was very enjoyable seeing the twist the Writer managed, that made it interesting to read. Something magical about a young woman and an older man. Very enjoyable!

Hey there PixelChick,

I'de give your story a 150 but the computer wont'permit. The theme is fairly common yet you wrote an extremely adaptation of every, including me, old man. Will she return next Tuesday at 3 pm? Hope so. professorwheeze@excite.com

The story has been done before, as others have said. But, ALL stories have been done before. You handled this one very well. The first cum-scene was great. It was very hot. I enjoyed it a lot. The sceond fuck-scene could have used a little more detail. In sum, you did a fine job telling the story. Please keep going.

This is what dreams are made of! Keep them cumin just like this one and possibly a second chapter would be in order!