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nice, you did not finish with your two friends. did they know it was your sister on

the web ? your tale is good with just the two of you.

Good story. But please learn the difference between "you're" and "your".

Sequel plz

Please write a second chapter. I can see many chapters to this and even have them become lovers for life.

Your, you're...too, to...were, we're...

More please. This is a very erotic tale, worth continuing.

Loved him fucking Sydney.

I hope you add another chapter where he admits to knowing it was her. Also That his buddies have guessed it was her.

Great story 5*s

Fun read other than the childish errors in grammar that are like potholes in an otherwise nice roadway.

Try to recognize contactions by their meaning. Sound out the longer form in your mind and maybe that will help your spellings. A contraction uses an apostrophe to join two words into one, substituting for the missing letter(s).

your : belonging to you (possesive)

You're : You Are (contraction)

were : past tense of are (adverb)

We're : We Are (contraction)

there : farther than here (locative)

their : belonging to them (possesive)

They're : They Are (contraction)

Too : also, as well was, in addition to, more (adverb)

To: opposite of from, a direction (preposition)

then : indicating a point in time : "then she came"

than : comparing objects or qualities : "larger than his"

this story. Good Read!

Might be fun to have a gangbang with the brother and two friends

First I apologise for the rude comments about grammar of my fellow readers. That is simply not appropriate. Why don't they spend their efforts in writing their own story?

But back to your story, I really liked it, and hope you will put together a sequel? After all, they seem to have so much to discover!

Please? :-)

This story is excellent and i don’t give a crap about grammer or spelling unless it detracts from the understanding of the story. I do wish that he had shown her more evidence of his love for her rather than just wham bam. She talked about a boy friend that only wanted to bang her and split. He should have taken his clu from that especially since she is his twin sister who he should have a lot of love for her in the place. If there is a second chapter to this he should show that.

First of all you CAN NOT look at a vagina. It's the fuck tube idiot. Do you call a cock a urethra??? WHY don't you call a pussy a cervix? It would be equal to calling it a vagina. Do you call a dick a prostate? Also bare pussy is great for wimps of today that think they are men. They just love the six year old look.