All Comments on 'The Power to Control Ch. 02'

Please don't let it be too long for the chapter. It been great sofar

You're story is still quite intriguing....but you really need to proofread your work. One or two mistakes could be looked over, but you have more than a dozen grammatical errors, which are quite distracting. But still can't wait for chapter 3.

I appreciated not all families have the same superpowers, and I would like to see someone else using their powers. Here's hoping for the next chapters!