All Comments on 'The Predator Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Mr Spyce---Have you ever been attracted by

normal sexual activity?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Love it

I actually love this story! :) I can't wait for the next one. Now i'm curious to see what the punishment is going to be :) hahaha

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Amateurish

The story abruptly ends part of the way through, and the grammatical tense, setting, and characters change.

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