All Comments on 'The Prelude to Sharing My Wife'

If your first paragraph is a lie like this one was ... stop writing now and forget the other chapters.

That explains it. Any story that contains the words "the lifestyle" in the first paragraph is in free-fall. Everything after that was a fucking joke. Were you going for humor?

1* of course

My wife and I share stories of our past to spice things up.Great way to really get hot and know each other.Thanks for sharing your story.

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dumb cuck shit.

You probably have a ton of hot stories to tell, and you're just dying to tell them to someone. Obviously, you can't share them with anyone you know, so you came to this site, assuming that an erotic story site would be the ideal place to share your stories with the safety of anonymity.

When you submitted this story, you probably assumed that a category called "Loving Wives" with the description of "swinging, sharing, and extramarital fun" was the logical category for your story about swinging, sharing, and extramarital fun.

A lot of new writers make that mistake, trust me.

You're probably confused by the response to this story. That's also common for new writers. The responses from angry old men will outnumber any other type of response by a ratio of ten-to-one. My advice is to either ignore or laugh at those ten and write for the one.

Best of luck. Thanks for contributing.

Hey, 𝐒𝐖𝐈𝐍𝐆𝐄𝐑𝐅𝐀𝐆, go eat your usual cum treat from wifey's pussy, and when you are done, do us all a favor and go eat a gun for dessert, you CUCK MORON.

This was badly thought out and poorly told drivel. Nothing original, clever or sexy about it. Thoroughly unlikable characters. Take a hint from the low scores and post your stories elsewhere.

Somewhat like taking flying lessons from an ostrich. Check out his author page and you can see how successful you'll be by following his advice. Dazzling! Attaining such mediocrity is truly an amazing feat.

anony is just a used piece of ass wipe

You must be the dumb fuck who one-bombed about fifteen of my stories to get them all below the "red-H' level. You're too stupid to realize what a waste of time that was!

LOL.

You know very well one-bombing doesn't work here. Nearly every story here has a score of 4.00 or better, eventually. You had 15 stories above 4.50? Is there any evidence of that, I mean, beyond you saying so? You're just a bit... unreliable when it comes to the facts. Some evidence would be... nice. Impressive, if true!

Of course, so few people read or vote on your stories that one low vote could probably have quite the impact. If someone one-bombed your stories, just hang on. When the next sweep comes through, you'll get your red "H's" back. I thought scores didn't matter to you, though? Now you're complaining about them? I thought you were a tough guy who "writes for himself" and doesn't give a damn about scores. No? Ah, well, Swingerjoe has a glass jaw, after all. Now we can all just smile when you say scored don't matter to you.

You missed my point, sweetie (as usual.) I told that anony that all of that effort (and I can't even imagine how much time and effort it must have taken) was for nothing, precisely because I don't care about the scores. I stopped giving a shit about grades the moment I tossed my cap at college graduation.

Frankly, I care more about my number of followers, which is edging so, so close to 600. (Which I believe is 600 more than you.)

To answer your question, yes, I had roughly fifteen stories with little "red-H's" next to them -- eleven of which were my Third Revolution series. Then, all of a sudden, I noticed they all disappeared -- like magic! Even the one chapter of Third Revolution that was scored over 4.7 was magically reduced to 4.49! If you look at my current stories list, you'll see five stories at 4.49, and six at 4.48. What a coincident! LOL.

You ought to know, since you're anonymous.

she is a cheater, he is a wimp, so this only can end in the mud.

Fucking loved it I'd love to get "gang banged" by a few cops or factory guys or even construction workers roofers or firemen , I'm 24 my zodiac sign even says I'm sexually inclined or whatever means I love getting fucked a lot. Luckily I've had a three sum but being the factory slut would be great especially since I live right across the street from one lol but my bf that I live with thinks it's weird to share me he s 37 I don't get it you got a hot little young black slut would be doing what you and your friends want. Crewcabangers are sexy spice up our lives lol

dumb cuck shit.

Hot story about a total pig. Who would really want to be married to her. To each his own and it sounds like he gets other pussy in the lifestyle also. In these cases for me as someone who would never share either because of jealousy or insecurities know that everyone that I've known to cheat or swing all wind up divorced. People start to sneak around even though they can do it with there partner. A friend thought he could handle sharing so they went to a big party. He got to fuck a hot wife while her hubby took his wife to another room. He finished up and they looked for their spouses and when they found them he fell apart. The wife was blowing the other husband who had a bigger fatter dick than he did while a fat black guy as he described was pounding his wife's previous virgin ass. He caused a scene but they didn't stop until they finished as the girl he was with and other guys pulled him to another area. They did agree to go together and she apologized repeatedly but he could get past it . It took 6 months and he couldn't stay hard as they tried to have sex together so he filed for divorce. Both were devestated and an example of a great couple destroyed for a few hour of fucking . There is hope they might get back . She still tries and hasn't dated anyone in over a year. She was always a good girl and was disgusted with herself for letting it get out of control but they went together drank took escacy for the first and only time and most of all didn't know another guy was gonna fuck her. She was with the other hubby when some guy put his dick in her . She was lost in it all and the guy she was with started ducking her mouth roughly. That whole scene lasted only minutes but he walked in as they were really pounding her yelling all kinds of obsenaties at her. She felt disgusted, dirty and like a pig which she never was .

Okay, it's your first story, so I really think any reader, with just a speck of human kindness, would cut you some slack. So far I've read the comments up to this point and didn't find much in the way of encouragement. By my count only two of those who bore the poison pen has ever written a story, but of course they would probably know what they like, if they were to see it. Anyway, it is what it is....

I'm going to score this a 3 since its your first. Constructive Comments: You made it sound like a journal, not like a story. I mean you told us all that happened. what do I mean? Consider this excerpt.

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She told me of one time she sucked 9 guys off in the back of a van after work because she lost a bet on a football game. She confided that in her early 20s she was known as the "Factory Slut", she'd suck and fuck pretty much every day on breaks and lunch.

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Suppose you did something like this:

"What's the most number of guys you fucked in one night?"

"One time I lost a bet on a football game and had to pay off by fucking nine guys."

"Naw! You're joking--How? When? Were they all there at one time."

"Yep, in the back of a van; it was one night after work. Back then, I was only twenty, I was known as the factory slut. Shoot! I'd usually suck somebody every break, and on lunch hour some lucky guy got the fucking of his life."

I'll quit there, but do you see how that style storytelling shows us a much better picture of the wife than the way you told it?

Good luck with your writing, we need more new writers to replace those who throw up their hands in disgust. cd

I may be the only wife commenting on this but I think this is s promising start. My husband loves me to tell him about times I fucked other guys and I must admit I get wet in this sort of thing too even though I've not been unfaithful to him (yet) and most of my stories are made up. I do love the slutty past of your character, though. Do keep it up.

It's a one star even if it don't count. Who gives a shit, at least I feel better giving what this piece of "dreck" deserved.

... Also there are men who have a strong but still dormant voyeur/cuck-wannabe side.

Since cuck714 will be writing a wife sex story, he or she must be given the artistic freedom to rid his imagination & fantasies of all inhibitions & second thoughts. Only then will his/her prose be sincere & true.

Based on my own experience, when a girlfriend (or wife) becomes very comfortable with you, she may confess to you some things from her past that can shock you. It will usually mean she trusts you completely.

Then she tells you a colleague of hers asked her out at the company picnic earlier that day... "I told him that i am flattered but i am married [i have a steady relationship]... i thanked him for asking me... i told him we can still be friends... don't be mad at me, i also gave him a friendly hug and kissed him... i was aiming at his cheek but he turned his face the other way i my kiss landed on his lips... no tongue..."

Next time she tells you that a while back she had a one-night stand with her Taekwondo instructor. She tells you her boyfriend was mad at her: he had been trying to get hold of her untill 3 am.

Fast forward, she tells you that your best friend is an excellent dancer. "I love dancing with him, i mean slow dances, but i must tell you his hard-on is pressing against me all the time. I thought you should know... i will still dance with him but only if that's OK with you... i love you so much you have nothing to worry about, you could never lose me... one word from you & i will stop dancing with him... tell me you love me..."

She is still married to me. I forgave her the fling with my (former) best friend.

That was hot! Really hot! I love hearing stories of my wife's past, too. She's got big boobs, got fucked A LOT before me, and guys still never fail to check her out. I was out the other night with her and her friend Ashley. I overheard the 2 guys at the bar sitting near us as we left refer to both of them as hot. This was after I caught them eye fucking the two girls as they walked to and from their barstools.

Her stories never fail to make me rock hard. She enjoys telling me how much guys love her tits and the countless loads she's had shot on her tits. Also, she loves to tell me how much she enjoys a stiff cock. She knows how to get me off.

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

to her now husband... Many women would carry their past adventures to their grave. And live the memories as she has sex with her husband.. Been there done that . thanks

more cuck shit.

I had also loved to hear about my wife's earlier duck sessions

One can only wonder at the mentality of the (so called critics) hate mongers that can only trash others that write. Not all stories or themes suit every one; so if it isn't for you, just shut up and don't read them.

I wonder not only about the morality, but about the intelligence of a SHPOS who would enjoy a story about a mentally ill man victimized by a vicious whore.

What happened that led to my sharing my wife.

Let me answer that for you. Clinical and psychological studies would peg you as a gay/bi man living in denial and the desire to have the wife be a slut allows said closeted male to live vicariously through her.

Now whether you like that very simple and honest fact doesnt matter, there's very little chance you aren't straight.

Glad I could help. I'll send you my bill.