All Comments on 'The Price of Magic'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
1st Chapter?

Would love to hear more about this witch.

TJSkywindTJSkywindover 9 years ago
It took me a moment

Sam Haines - Samhain

sneaky

DocOcDocOcover 9 years ago
More I hope!!!

The Samhain trick was good, well told. MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
contest

Why didn't you save this story for an Oct. publication, and entry into the Halloween contest?

Who knows, it may have even been good enough to place with a little work.

sithonsithonabout 8 years ago
Amusing concept 5 stars.

The story could use some expansion. I like how the more difficult a outcome more sex is required to power the spell. Maybe she could tackle peace in the middle East. She might need a wet/dry vac for all the semen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I Liked the Ending

I'm not a fan of rapey stories, but I did like the ending of this one. Seems she gets a happy ending after all.

I would like to see more of her adventures.

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