by sycksycko
I'm not a fan of rapey stories, but I did like the ending of this one. Seems she gets a happy ending after all.
I would like to see more of her adventures.
The story could use some expansion. I like how the more difficult a outcome more sex is required to power the spell. Maybe she could tackle peace in the middle East. She might need a wet/dry vac for all the semen.
Why didn't you save this story for an Oct. publication, and entry into the Halloween contest?
Who knows, it may have even been good enough to place with a little work.