All Comments on 'The Progression'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
5 stars

Well written, realistic and erotic story. Thank you for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good

But I would of liked it to be a longer story as John is taken further down the rabbit hole.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Ok

It was ok. You ran through the progression too quickly and with too few details. Plus, those last two sentences ruin any concept of realism.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Add on to tthe story... wonderful...i lov3d every word.

flospringflospringabout 6 years ago
Awesome

Really one of the best stories I read.

Wish it will not stop here.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
1 star

People claiming this story is realistic are a special breed of stupid.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I liked the story but agree that the last 2 sentences ruined it.

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