All Comments on 'The Promotion'

by mingalee

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chesthairslavechesthairslaveover 10 years ago
Faster Than a Speeding Bullet

This could have been a good humiliation story. But instead, it's a big disappointment. The pacing of the plot is like a flash flood from a bursting dam. The speed leaves no time for any characterization. Reminds me of Cliff Notes.

smoothboismoothboiover 10 years ago

I like girls into gay males.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
wow!

This story should have been an editor's pic/it is just bursting with potential/its incomplete and need a whole lotta fine tuning n dusting off but my god, its a great story waiting to happen.

kinky48186kinky48186over 10 years ago
Great start

Please keep it going... I would love this to happen to me in real life,,,

mingaleemingaleeover 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you

Thank you for your kind comments. This story is based off of some sexting fantasy play I did for a friend. It was a change to do humiliation and reluctance. I think I should maybe take a writing course to learn to refine my writing.

lonerancherlonerancherover 10 years ago
wonderful stroy

She his wife was a total bitch an he will stay a not gay not straight but a fucked man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
thats so fucked up in the so right way i came buckets

Buckets

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Love sph

I have a very small cock clit and would love to be used like that

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Short and sweet and I loved it I would love to apply for a job there x sissy Lucy

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