by mingalee
This could have been a good humiliation story. But instead, it's a big disappointment. The pacing of the plot is like a flash flood from a bursting dam. The speed leaves no time for any characterization. Reminds me of Cliff Notes.
This story should have been an editor's pic/it is just bursting with potential/its incomplete and need a whole lotta fine tuning n dusting off but my god, its a great story waiting to happen.
Please keep it going... I would love this to happen to me in real life,,,
Thank you for your kind comments. This story is based off of some sexting fantasy play I did for a friend. It was a change to do humiliation and reluctance. I think I should maybe take a writing course to learn to refine my writing.
She his wife was a total bitch an he will stay a not gay not straight but a fucked man.
Short and sweet and I loved it I would love to apply for a job there x sissy Lucy