All Comments on 'The Punishment'

I liked this story but it also made me really sad, especially at the end. I feel that a relationship like that should not be treated that lightly..

Solid first story. Personal preference, I'm not fond of this type of dominant. They come across as big ego jerks, and that they probably are in all phases of their lifes. Spoiled frat boys, not mature dominant men.

You have her kneeling with a three foot spread. Visualize that. Think a yardstick, if that helps. You have her doing the splits, not kneeling. And somehow, her butpt is still raised high. Tilted, perhaps, but not raised. She's dripping like an old faucet but nothing is said when she rubs her crotch all over his pants leg. Given his personality, that seems an offence.

I think her lucky to have failed to meet his standards for the club performance. Girlfriend needs to hunt up a new master. IMO

...for your comments. Please don't give up yet. I have a plan for our pair. Dishie

I loved everything about this story and just wished there was more ! Thank you