All Comments on 'The Punk and The Bride'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
I loved it!

So great! A little melancholy, but with all the best parts of a reunion. It made me think of my ex... Thanks for the lovely story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
AWESOME!

Awesome story!

PistolpackinpetePistolpackinpeteover 14 years ago
Can't feel too sorry for Tom based on....

....the fact that leopards rarely change their spots.Funny stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Incredibly hot

This is an amazing story – a very hot read. Your writing is wonderful, and the focus unstinting. Loved all the contrasts: the punk and the bride; her former self and her new bridal glory; the sexy red lace panties and all the fantastic layers of white bridal dress; his lust and his love for her. God! The urgency too and the taboo. Incredibly well written and handled. I loved it! Thank you so much.

warm_wet_locationwarm_wet_locationover 14 years ago
Nice day for a ....white wedding

Nice day to start again....

Scotsman69Scotsman69over 14 years ago
Beautifully handled

Exquisite story. Thank you.

C_frommnC_frommnabout 14 years ago
Hen Party?

I think the Bride had a Better Hen Party then anyone could have Arranged.

and it Sounds like Ali will be getting in touch with her Ex to Sloppy her up some.

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