by empty_coffee_cup
I think the Bride had a Better Hen Party then anyone could have Arranged.
and it Sounds like Ali will be getting in touch with her Ex to Sloppy her up some.
This is an amazing story – a very hot read. Your writing is wonderful, and the focus unstinting. Loved all the contrasts: the punk and the bride; her former self and her new bridal glory; the sexy red lace panties and all the fantastic layers of white bridal dress; his lust and his love for her. God! The urgency too and the taboo. Incredibly well written and handled. I loved it! Thank you so much.
....the fact that leopards rarely change their spots.Funny stuff.
So great! A little melancholy, but with all the best parts of a reunion. It made me think of my ex... Thanks for the lovely story.