All Comments on 'The Ravaging in the Forrest'

This is a good creature story and I enjoyed the imagery and your descriptions. It's always great to read a story that can be finished in one day and isn't a super long series and this one was quite enjoyable.

One thing you could work on is editing the story, I'm not sure if you were in a rush or you could use the help of an editor as you spell divine wrong several times, where and wear are used incorrectly at times and sometimes random words are capitalized.

Aside from that I had a lot of fun reading your story and hope you continue writing more :D

Thank you for your comments, I will get the storey edited in the future. Please comment on what you would like to hear in future stories.

That was fucking hot oh my god, I didn’t want it to end