by Billshaw1982
The only good thing in this sick story? Next part will show up only in 2024 (six years from now)! This story has a bad and retarded plot and retarded characters...1* (where are the negative ratings when we need them?)
I guess it's well written but, the subject matter is so offensive that I have to rate it 1*. After all this site rates writers for writing talent as well as subject matter and I had a difficult time following the logic of this story. Thanks for submitting and giving us a "free" story.
Complete trash and waste of time.
I’m fact this writer must be a complete freaking retard to write something so stupid pathetic nonsense like this lame story.
1* for this crap.
It's not that they are in a semi-open relationship
It's not that it's another story where the wife appears to be able to play a lot more than the husband
It's not even so much that she at least once flat out cheated on him
It's the fucking mind games. The torturing of a husband whose own confirmation bias makes him refuse to see the wife for the scheming manipulative uncaring bitch that she is. She chose to be a 3 hole cum slut who is open for business 24/7 instead of faithful to the man she allegedly loves, so she should fucking act like it and be available for his needs when he has them except when she really is feeling ill or too fucking sore or tired to have a go. She thought it herself, that her husband is "awesome" for letting her do what she did, and her reward for him is to fuck with his mind and pull a power trip on him. Fuck this bitch.
a lot of BTB fans could easily be RAAC fans.
But too many m'lady types (crying even more than the BTB crowd) don't realize they only forgive mind games, dishonesty, disrespect from ... women. they'll happily try word salad sophistry (if their not flat out sperging out). word salads trying to lump all men and women into perfect shallow boxes.
these fedora tipping manletts don't realize btb could easily be 'beat the bastard'. just wanted to add that in case the batsig...sorry...virtue signal is used
Not going on the cuckold or the BTB angle, but I didn't catch a plot line other than a woman jumping into bed with as many guys as she could. There seemed to be no conflict or plot. The main character was the only climax in the narrative.
Is this a lead in to a larger narrative.
. . . this could be the first chapter in a story about a couple in which the wife was a porn star, and he accepted that that was her job. Such a story could be interesting, but that’s not where it went.
I don’t know where you’re going with this, and I didn’t get any sense that you did, either.
what you smell id your upper lip,. or your dead wife's pussy, same thing!
This storyline had no story, it was just a cheating slut cheating on her husband with anyone that would fuck her. It had no real ending or anything. It was a waste of time to read. 1 star
Long, rambling, digressive, repetitious, full of irrelevant detail yet utterly lacking in important detail, and plotless. Just a bunch of words.