by CopyCat13
Kind of peculiar but I'll keep reading if you continue to post.
A gym class? Mistaken identity? Lesbians? This wasn't good enough to make me want to read chapter 2. Bad story telling all around.
99% of stories on Literotica are of the 'read it all before variety'. Good effort for producing something different.
No, probably. Probably the worst thing I've ever read on Lit. Oh, wait, I forgot about everything by SamuelX. (Or whatever his slimy username is)
This could not possibly happen in real life for so many reasons. A believable scenario would be much more exciting.
Glad to have found your story. Don't like age regression stories when they go back to being a baby. Like this one, except where are the guys that will hassle her. She's no longer an adult, so can't talk down to them. She'll have to use feminine wiles to talk her way out of being hassled by rowdy school boys. You of course may go in a different direction with this. Will she lose her confidence to check her wayward sister. Will sis get her into trouble? Great plot idea!
I really liked your plot idea and enjoyed the stoty. I'd like to see more. Please carry on.
I'd like to see what comes next as well. I've been waiting for a few years now...