All Comments on 'The Retrieval... Ch. 02'

Can't wait for more to see what happens!!

This is such an amazing story - suspense, drama, action, conflict, passion...good elements of a spy novel. Looking forward to chapter 3.

loF, terrific imagineering, engaging characters, believable dialogue, quirky inner monologues, in a fast-paced action thriller with humor and unexpected plot-twists..

Great and Lovely Story Again!

Will be here to see Ch.03

Thank you

Aunt Helena

What an amazing story. Very well written. I can't wait to see how it continues.

I am soooo hooked on this story! I feel so greedy making this comment, but I really hope chapter 3 is coming soon. I've reread chapters 1 and 2 several times and cannot belive how into this story I am. Bravo!

I don't want to wait for another chapter!

Wonderful story I can't wait for the next chapter to post. An easy 5 stars!

Well thought out, well written with the proper amount of erotic scenes and adventure.

I thought it was as good as I've read on this site, possibly ever.

BRAVO!

Can it come tomorrow? I can't wait any longer than that =)

This is so good! Thank you for continuing this wonderful story! I can't wait for the next chapter!

L

Please don't make us wait another 3 weeks between chapters! Anxious for more!

One of my best stories. Please Chap 3 ASAP. Really loving this. Thanks 4 sharing.

Wow. I mean just wow. I feel really selfish asking for the next chapter, but I really need the next chapter. I'm so hooked on this series! 5 stars for sure.

Just wow you left me totally dumbfounded I hope to be able to read the next chapter I just got totally hooked.😱

Wow I love this series. One of the best yet. I am so hooked!!!

This has been an AMAZING story so far! I SO can't wait for Chapter 3!

This is just so well written. So many layers to the story! Leah falling for Jules, Jules pretending she's not because she's afraid (?) to admit it. There is much more to this story, I can tell. Please continue!

~ L

So good and suspensful you've ruined me for most other stories.

It says that this is a 2 part series.... Are you going to change your mind and write more?

I sure hope so, I fell in love with these characters, and need to see what happens.

You can't possibly leave the ending there.

...for a major TV network lesbian action/thriller drama, this would be the pilot! Best I've read on this site, both because it could stand alone without the sex scenes and because those sex scenes are very well done. Now please get busy and give us Chapter 3. (Rizzoli and Isles, move over!)

How did you do it again? Thank you so much! More please! :)

I've read part 1 and almost had a heart attack when you left off part 2 with that cliffhanger! I couldn't go to bed without finishing part 2 and now I'm desperately waiting for part 3. This is better than a mini-series!!! Hurry up with the next episode please!!!

You're on a roll girl....keep it going. When's the movie come out? :) You're running with something very special here.

I thank you so much for this story. I was fortunate to read the first chapter shortly after you posted it, and chapter 2 was well worth the wait. I look forward to chapter 3.

Hohoq

Don't let us hanging long!

Thank y'all for all of the great comments - I really appreciate it. I also wanted to let y'all know I'm hard at work on part 3. Please try to be a little patient with me - I want to make sure I take some time to get it right and not disappoint you rather than rush to get it posted. I hope it will be worth the wait - and it won't be too much longer! : )

Thanks again! --FUN

Do take your time, please please not too long please ;). Thank you so much LoverofFun!

I can't wait to read more of this, please don't take too long!

I am so into this story, it's so well written. The character development and interaction are well done, and the suspense and action are palpable and vivid. Who's good, who's bad, what's really up? Well done.

It's like I'm watching a movie. And then - cliffhanger!

I never expected to read something as intriguing as this here. Wow! unbelievable character development and storyline. Can't wait for 3rd part.

i love long stories where the charactersare wonderfully developed and has me at the edge of my seat, this story has both..i will be patiently waiting for the 3rd part

Please hurry and write the next chapter.

This story is awesome....any update on part 3

Another of my all time favorites! The theme song to that movie couples nicely with the moral of this story too. Love, LOVE your work. Keep it up!

WHAT THE FUUUCK WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED HUHUHUHUHU. THIS STORY IS JUST SOO PERFECT

so to speak, and ends with a cliffhanger. Love how this story constantly pulls the rug out from under you.

I need to go to sleep but i gotta keep reading

Geeze, I'm really glad I'm not reading this part after you just published it. The suspense would have been killing me. 😏