by loverofFUN
Geeze, I'm really glad I'm not reading this part after you just published it. The suspense would have been killing me. 😏
so to speak, and ends with a cliffhanger. Love how this story constantly pulls the rug out from under you.
WHAT THE FUUUCK WHAT THE FUCK HAPPENED HUHUHUHUHU. THIS STORY IS JUST SOO PERFECT
Another of my all time favorites! The theme song to that movie couples nicely with the moral of this story too. Love, LOVE your work. Keep it up!
i love long stories where the charactersare wonderfully developed and has me at the edge of my seat, this story has both..i will be patiently waiting for the 3rd part
I never expected to read something as intriguing as this here. Wow! unbelievable character development and storyline. Can't wait for 3rd part.
I am so into this story, it's so well written. The character development and interaction are well done, and the suspense and action are palpable and vivid. Who's good, who's bad, what's really up? Well done.
It's like I'm watching a movie. And then - cliffhanger!
Do take your time, please please not too long please ;). Thank you so much LoverofFun!
Thank y'all for all of the great comments - I really appreciate it. I also wanted to let y'all know I'm hard at work on part 3. Please try to be a little patient with me - I want to make sure I take some time to get it right and not disappoint you rather than rush to get it posted. I hope it will be worth the wait - and it won't be too much longer! : )
Thanks again! --FUN
I thank you so much for this story. I was fortunate to read the first chapter shortly after you posted it, and chapter 2 was well worth the wait. I look forward to chapter 3.
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You're on a roll girl....keep it going. When's the movie come out? :) You're running with something very special here.
I've read part 1 and almost had a heart attack when you left off part 2 with that cliffhanger! I couldn't go to bed without finishing part 2 and now I'm desperately waiting for part 3. This is better than a mini-series!!! Hurry up with the next episode please!!!
...for a major TV network lesbian action/thriller drama, this would be the pilot! Best I've read on this site, both because it could stand alone without the sex scenes and because those sex scenes are very well done. Now please get busy and give us Chapter 3. (Rizzoli and Isles, move over!)
It says that this is a 2 part series.... Are you going to change your mind and write more?
I sure hope so, I fell in love with these characters, and need to see what happens.
You can't possibly leave the ending there.
So good and suspensful you've ruined me for most other stories.
This is just so well written. So many layers to the story! Leah falling for Jules, Jules pretending she's not because she's afraid (?) to admit it. There is much more to this story, I can tell. Please continue!
~ L
Just wow you left me totally dumbfounded I hope to be able to read the next chapter I just got totally hooked.😱
Wow. I mean just wow. I feel really selfish asking for the next chapter, but I really need the next chapter. I'm so hooked on this series! 5 stars for sure.
One of my best stories. Please Chap 3 ASAP. Really loving this. Thanks 4 sharing.
Please don't make us wait another 3 weeks between chapters! Anxious for more!
This is so good! Thank you for continuing this wonderful story! I can't wait for the next chapter!
L
Well thought out, well written with the proper amount of erotic scenes and adventure.
I thought it was as good as I've read on this site, possibly ever.
BRAVO!
I don't want to wait for another chapter!
Wonderful story I can't wait for the next chapter to post. An easy 5 stars!
I am soooo hooked on this story! I feel so greedy making this comment, but I really hope chapter 3 is coming soon. I've reread chapters 1 and 2 several times and cannot belive how into this story I am. Bravo!
What an amazing story. Very well written. I can't wait to see how it continues.
Great and Lovely Story Again!
Will be here to see Ch.03
Thank you
Aunt Helena
loF, terrific imagineering, engaging characters, believable dialogue, quirky inner monologues, in a fast-paced action thriller with humor and unexpected plot-twists..
This is such an amazing story - suspense, drama, action, conflict, passion...good elements of a spy novel. Looking forward to chapter 3.