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All Comments on 'The Reunion'

by Waynesgirl

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gordo12gordo12about 6 years ago
Let's just go with STUPID and leave it at that.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
What

In a hostage situation, ugh.

Cal59Cal59about 6 years ago
Wtf?

Incredibly stupid

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

it needs to be fleshed out a lot. Some examples would be; describe the characters, put speech in " " , slow down.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
You sir

Are a dumbass. Resuce first then sex after they are home and safe but that would require you to actually write a story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Wait...

How are they sex slaves but she doesnt wanna die a virgin. The hell?

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