All Comments on 'The Ride Home Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Looking forward to read more ! Please continue like this !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Continue the story - Please

Love the story line. It has been quite some time since the last chapter. I do hope you can finish it. It is annoying to read such a story line and then nothing happens afterwards. What happens at dinner? Does she get into more conditioning. What key words are given and what do they do? Does she get away or does she turn into a complete zombie with no will of her own (most stories end in the latter).

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