All Comments on 'The Right Tool For The Job'

The whole thing with the domme was blech.

I'm sorry you didn't enjoy this. However, I'm puzzled; you referred to 'domme'? To whom did you refer? The story is yaoi - male on male sex. Nips is dom, not domme. Yes, there is an implied threesome going on off-screen, but while Demona is not submissive, neither are Cyrus and Ardanis. I didn't go into it in the story as the focal point was Nips & Racer, but you can safely assume that Demona, Cyrus and Ardanis were having a very enjoyable menage a trois as equals.

You may have to do a vignette to focus on the threesome between Demona, Cyrus, and Ardanis. Would be fun to know what went on with them.

There's an idea... though I would check with the characters' owners first, of course. Just exactly how DID Demona, Cyrus and Ardanis spend the afternoon...? :<secret smile>