All Comments on 'The Right Way to Greet Your S/O'

This was a very hot read! I really enjoy pregnant sex stories, and trans stories, having them combined blew my load! Thanks for the best!

Am thinking about being pregnant now. I wish. Xxxxx

I have always wanted to be able to get pregnant ... that would be so sexy and hot ..

you called the trans woman by he and him prnouns a few times

I was really liking this one, until you started addressing the translady in the story as he and him and boyfriend and referring to her parts in crude male genital tems. I tried to look past that but as a transman married to a transwoman, I would never even think of referring to a trans lady in male pronouns and if I ever did I'm sure my wife would end me.. So that in and of itself just made this story so unrealistic that it was hard to get into. You may wish to correct that and make this story a bit longer and less rushed.

Why did you misgender her when she penetrated him? Not okay

I have been interested in transfolk for a while now. Been thinking of the possibility that as a gay man, I might someday fall for a man who is trans. So I was interested in reading your story. I have made some mistakes in my own stories, so I know how difficult it can be to bear the burden. Mistakes come in all sizes. Have to share how jarring it is to hit the big pothole of pronoun errors that pop up without warning. If it is possible to pull this story and resubmit it after corrections, please consider doing so. I will hold off my rating until then. It's okay to learn and grow better. XOXO