All Comments on 'The Ring of Cronus Pt. 15'

by CronustheTitan

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
you got a hit,brake a leg

keep writing your stories your way.they're great and give us more.

Deep SoakerDeep Soakeralmost 15 years ago
Another winner

I am amazed at the quantity and quality of writing. Have you written before?

John seems to have sex so frequently, I keep expecting someone to walk in on him while he is with someone else. Of course if this happened it would not matter. Either the new person would join them with no thought of jealosy, or John would change their thoughts and memories. He seems to have god-like powers. What price will John pay to have and use these powers?

Please keep John moral, ethical, financially savey, and horny.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Roy???

Again, John and roy are not the same...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Proofreading

Its a word. Its a verb. Its best left to those over 10 years old.

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