by ManUnited1086
This season needs to close the door on Derek. Its just getting annoying now... as i just cant invest in the story if whenever something new starts up there is that inevitability that Derek will destroy it.
And why doesn't Duncan just tell Derek the Russians will be after him... They said if he fails they'll go after him.. Its a massive leverage piece that Duncan for some reason isn't using.
So until Derek is gone this is going to be a rather monotonous story.
I can definitively say this is my least favorite chapter of this story. It adds practically nothing to the plot and the sex just did nothing for me, which is incredible when you consider you're involving three of the hottest actresses working today.
You can do better.
Would love to see him have another night with Melissa, maybe teach her how to squirt, then as a reward he gets her ass?
Definitely a nice improvement over the last chapter. I think things are going a lot better now.
Duncan has been having lots of unprotected sex, I wonder if an unexpected pregnancy is going to pop up