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Click hereHer mood changed. "That's good to hear, Alan. Thank you. I hope that motherfucker rots in there."
"Vito's going upstate for a long, long time. Even O.J.'s lawyers wouldn't be able to get him out of this one." He paused. He couldn't help but think about what she looked like naked, how the back of her head looked as it bobbed up and down on his cock. His chubby grew larger. "Listen, would you like to grab a bite to eat or something?"
She finally gave a little smile looking up at him. "No, no thank you. Maybe next time."
"Oh. Okay. Well, I guess I'll go. Give me a call if you need anything."
Before he could turn away Dana reached out and started to run her hand up his leg. Her smile turned into a smirk. "Hey, Alan, is that a night stick in your pants, or are you just happy to see me?"
To be continued...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 3 years agoVery well done. All the elements came together nicely. Easily 5 stars. Hope you do more. So much canvas to work with. It be fun to see Dana undercover, can't remember it grandpa Jim did a lot of that or not but she's her own woman. At the very least Vito's business partners my have a job for her. Surely Detective Alan isn't done with her. Again great work. Thanks
fearthisssalmost 6 years agoAuthorGlad you enjoyed the story. Unfortunately, this story has gotten zero feedback before yours and the star rating hasn't been great, although it's still above 4. With that said, unless one of those two factors changes, there probably won't be a follow up to this one. Or if I come up a super story line I feel like has to be written.
Anonymousalmost 6 years agoI like the characters you built up, even the stereotypical mobsters. The sex was hot and you created a good visual. I do hope you make a follow-up chapter.
