All Comments on 'The Romantic Vacation Ch. 03 Pt. 01'

You need some remedial work with your spelling ("of" does not make the contraction for have -- as in would've versus would of); nor is "your" the contraction for you are -- you're is. You have a nice vocabulary, good descriptive skills and an active imagination. Use them wisely!

Keep up your work! You are a very creative individual, I look forward to reading more of them. (And so does my cock!) Don't let these people with a negative comment about your spelling get you down, I have read alot of these stories and I drop them after the first paragraph.

Two whores get together.