by 100 Angry Bananas
You captured the style wonderfully and delivered up a creative, intelligent, top-notch tale! Well done!
While I admit my unfortunate ignorance of Lovecraft, you have crafted a magnificent story with strong detail and an entrancing theme. Perhaps it is because I have never read anything of this nature, but I was enraptured!
Congratulations on your gnawing, nameless horror of a story. You have culled well from Lovecraft's store.
Great Work. You were able to write very close to the style of H.P. Lovecraft. Sexy, I don?t know, but still a great work.
Lovecraft is one of my most fave of all authors, and this story was an EXCELLENT one. Well written, sticking to the traditional Lovecraft mythos. Definatly one to read again !
I doubt very many readers of this site know who H.P. Lovecraft and won't appreciate this story, which is a shame considering how well you nailed the tone and themes. This was a very fun read! Good job!