All Comments on 'The School Girls Ch. 01'

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sexybrummiesexybrummiealmost 20 years ago
please finish it

great story.

you need to continue - will you invite her into your flat and fuck her senseless?

she might be a bit young but if there is grass on the wicket lets play cricket!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Detail

THere are some spelling mistakes and errors in grammar, but the story is well written.

The plot is unusual and attractive. It has the potential for much development.

Yes, please, let us see how you develop the theme.

Oh, btw, I see the uniforms "grew" a skirt by the time the girls took them off - the original description omitted the skirt!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Real good start.

Does he get her to come to his apartment. Does he get her to bring any friends? Looking forward to ch. o2 and more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Please write more...

I need to hear more about these hot dirty babysluts!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Gimme more, lol!!

I'd love to hear, or read more. I have a schoolgirl fetish of my own. I swear, I dunno if it's the uniform, or if it's the assumption of innocence that comes with it, and then the shock of inhibitions that follow. The answer is probably a resounding, "YES"!! So please, continue sir...

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